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Glad that the concept was of interest.
Now, let's move on to the pressing questions:
Inquisitor
2 Arandor:
No, no, according to medieval standards, inquisitors were not so competent, i.e., they would rather hang 10 innocent people than find 1 guilty person out of 10. But I will still change it so that the abbot protects, and his function will be taken over by the elder, who, consequently, should be renamed to a ranger or something like that.
2 Tengro
It fits perfectly, because the village was in the middle of nowhere, and information about the inquisitor reached them so distorted by rumors that if an octopus had arrived, they would have called it an inquisitor, because, according to these rumors, the inquisitor was ruthless, and everyone who doubted would bitterly regret their actions on the pyre or in the torture chamber, so the local residents, seeing the inquisitor's entourage with many servants and a deputy, did not risk finding out his identity in more detail...
Further, regarding the heroines:
Alas and alack, but medieval Europe was stricter towards women, who were considered servants of the devil, and nothing can be done about it.
Regarding the nickname:
again, medieval times) may the hunchbacked, crooked-legged, and one-eyed ones flourish %)
About the artist:
Initially, it was assumed that he, like other naturalists, such as Leonardo da Vinci, studied the structure of the human body using corpses, which were difficult to find. This artist solved the problem brilliantly, receiving a fresh corpse every night, which was then dissected and turned into a "soup set" by morning, but this is an interesting version, I think it is worth changing his role, but it will also be necessary to reduce the frequency of the "death" event: once every 3 nights, otherwise I imagine that in the end the village will consist of only simpletons...
About the succubus: blocking is, of course, not bad, but is such an ability necessary for mafias? I think it would be better to focus on killing and give them the ability to convert enemies to their side, which would be more useful.
2 Tengro:
Yes, there is still a lot of work to be done, for now, it's just a draft)