Posts from Creation by fans of the game.

Go ahead and post it, we’ll check it out ;)

52 pages???? (planned for 300-400)

well, don't type it in the post, just upload the file.

AlexeyPank. In my opinion, it is unlikely that Siberia would be able to be an independent state now, at least for a long time, so if it were to separate from Russia, it would become part of China, Japan, or, even worse, the USA. I don't think that Siberians would be better off with the Chinese, Japanese, or Americans than with the Russians. As far as I know, salaries in Siberia are higher than in the European part of Russia, at least they were in Soviet times, and probably still are now. The problem of draining resources from Siberia needs to be solved by promoting one's own people to positions of power. For example, Yeltsin was a real Siberian man, as someone said after his death, and he was also president, so why didn't he even try to solve the problems you are writing about, but instead made the situation even worse and appointed Putin as his successor, instead of another Siberian?

I'm writing a long story. I'd share a link, but I'm afraid that few people will appreciate the second fandom... Although, if I don't write about the second fandom, they might not even notice it... I don't know. Should I post it?

I liked it, it's interesting. The concept may not be entirely new, but as far as I know, it's being applied to Heroes for the first time, so +1! Regarding the criticism, I would like more information about where the action takes place, what events happened before, that is, to better fit it into the framework of the history of Ashan. And also:

After another jolt, a huge stalactite fell from the ceiling and landed on Kria.

From where? A stalactite is ice, but there isn't any ice there, right? In general, I'm very glad that someone is undertaking creative endeavors for HoMM V, that's great! I will be eagerly awaiting the continuation! :o Thank you.

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They shed some light on the stalactites: it doesn't necessarily have to be ice, but it forms under the influence of water, and there probably isn't any water in the main hall of the Inferno fortress :) In my opinion, it would be better to have a stone block collapse instead of a stalactite :o

Very nice, Ivan :) I haven't played in a long time, and I don't remember what they did with the Overlord. If he can't be killed, you can at least beat him up so he doesn't stick around in Shi'o for too long. By the way, I have a written history of Ashan here. I used to be very into it and read it while playing, until I got tired of the game. There's also a different translation in the history compared to the licensed game, so I even corrected it. I think it could be very helpful in writing, although there are a lot of words... P.S. I corrected it up to the chapter "Empire in Flames".

Very nice, Ivan :)
I haven't played in a long time, I don't remember what they did with the Overlord. If he can't be killed, then you can just beat him up so he doesn't stick around in Shi'o for too long. :)
Actually, I have a written history of Ashan here. I used to be very into it and read it while playing, until I got tired of playing. There's also a different translation in the history than in the licensed game, so I also edited it. :) I think it could be very helpful in writing, although there are a lot of words... P.S. I edited it up to the chapter "Empire in Flames".

Thank you.
Hmm, so I guess I'll leave Kha-Belekh... I'll keep that in mind.
Thanks for the history too.

I also forgot to praise the excellent consistency of style with Heroes. :) All units and mechanics have been preserved, and nothing has been added, reworked, or embellished – it’s superb!

And I was thinking that the Overlord can be killed; after all, anything is possible. Markel was killed, wasn't he?
At the beginning of the game, it says that demons are immortal, meaning they simply return to Shio and go through the path from imp to devil again. Tieru told Agrael that the Griffin Heart of Nicholas is equally powerless against them, but here it was mentioned somehow that he deceived him (I haven't finished playing Heroes completely myself, so I don't know for sure :o). So, as I said before, everything is possible, especially in such a world.
P.S. Here, Forest Flower and Xana would have helped; where did they disappear to? I remember their discussions about Agrael and KO

Decided to jot down a few thoughts about Black here. I know someone from our forum thinks it's nonsense, but despite that, I want to know what others think.


The day was calm, and nothing foreshadowed trouble. Agler, the chieftain of the first elf tribe of the lands of Mail, was training as usual. - You are the best because you don't pay attention to fatigue, Agler, but that will be your downfall. - said the holy father, approaching Agler. - Holy Father, because of fatigue, weak people, elves, dwarves, and fusion warriors fell under the sword! I don't want their fate; our people are weak, the fiery rock is near; how can you not understand this?! - Agler replied. - I understand that, but you don't. The elves offered us refuge in their homes; why not go to them, or is your pride getting in the way? - Yes, that's exactly it. - Remember, pride is a vice, and whether you like it or not, you need to get rid of it. - I'm trying, but I can't. Suddenly, they noticed a dark figure. It was crawling on the ground, with great effort moving its arms and legs; it was clear that the creature was injured. - We need to help him! - Agler shouted. He rushed towards the unknown person. As it turned out, his arms and legs were burned, his clothes were torn, he was covered in soot and dirt, and he smelled of a campfire. The unknown person was breathing with difficulty and could not speak, but the mark on his arm made it clear - he was a slave. - One of the elves, - said Agler, approaching the holy father, carrying the dying man in his arms - clearly a slave; it's strange that no one has escaped from the soldiers of the fiery rock yet; the Master of Fiery Deception is cunning and strong; it is difficult to escape from him. - So this elf was lucky. Let's go; the monks will heal this poor fellow and take care of his health and well-being. And so, a whole month passed; everything was as usual: the soldiers of the fiery rock were killing everyone as usual, forcing some to work in the mines. The sick man recovered, and it was time for him to leave, but before that, he approached Agler and said: - O great chieftain, in gratitude for helping me, please accept this. He took out a black mask and handed it to Agler. He was surprised to see such a gift but did not refuse it. He went for a walk, but all the way, a strange feeling haunted him - he incredibly wanted to put on the gift. He went home, took the mask out of his cloak pocket, and... the world changed in an instant. Agler's golden curls turned black, chaos and horror were seen all around, and most importantly, he saw the lord of the fiery rock warriors of these lands - the Master of Fiery Deception. - Agler, by putting on this mask, you have pleased me very much. Now you and your people are my servants! Ha ha ha ha ha! Agler came out of the tent. Everything was really like that. About a thousand soldiers in black cloaks with hoods covering their faces stood before him. All the clothes and even the blades were black. He was surprised when he saw women and children in the ranks of this horde. He cursed the fiery rock for what they had done and at the same time loved it...

Seriously, when will the reviews be available?

I know a person from our forum who thinks this is nonsense, but despite that, I want to know the opinion of others.

It's nonsense.
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Well, why be so harsh? If you tone down the excessive drama a bit (for example, remove that "Ha ha ha ha"), it will be much better...

But demons are supposed to be imposing, right? Or is that just my opinion?

No, I disagree. This kind of trick is popular in Hollywood, but it looks cheap (yes, yes, those Hollywood movies look cheap! No matter how many millions/billions they invest in them!). And demons should be cunning, and cunning, in my opinion, doesn't really go well with pomposity.