Workshop

Keep working on it, Misha, keep working on it.
The idea is good, I would like to see a working implementation, and not this something that makes your eyes water when you read it.

She probably meant, for example, the complete absence of punctuation in the description, which makes the reading process quite difficult. + when I read it for the first time, I didn't quite understand who was evil and who was good (I'm not familiar with the theme), because I hardly saw any non-player characters being killed, there was only control everywhere.