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Thank you for organizing and participating :) I will take the mistakes and the public's interest into account next time. And now, some harsh criticism, don't be offended, I will also comment on my own work :)
#1.The idea is not bad, but it looks rushed. In principle, I'm not very good at this genre, so I'll say that I would fix the griffin (as I understand, this is the wonderful bird on which my sister from the faction is sitting, it's actually a griffin). Griffins seem to have bird-like front paws. Wings: I only see one wing, and it barely seems to be holding on in the picture; the author reduced the base of the wing too much. Furthermore, I didn't understand what or where the mage with the pacifier in his mouth is lying on, and where is his hand? The vampire's leg looks like it's broken or bent backwards? You need to work on the perspective. The demon's wings are confusing: it looks like they took 4 sticks, glued them in pairs, and glued a torn piece of paper between these pairs. The author needs to look at bat wings and their anatomy.
And lastly, regarding this drawing, purely from the perspective of a faction representative - why did they make the Fury completely naked, only wearing boots, bracers, and makeup? O_o.
#2.Oh, I know how difficult it can be to draw a person in a certain pose ;) but I will still point out the mistakes (don't be offended, author, you have many of them, and they are obvious!). First, the head: it's large in itself, if you look at it in relation to the body, and it's asymmetrical (the area of the lower jaw, cheekbones). Secondly, the face itself: I would emphasize the nose (wings of the nose, nostrils), because it looks like a small appendage, the lips are, of course, in a classic style - plump, but they look unrealistic, separate from the face, I would say, as if they were just glued on, and for some reason they are brown, although the hair color is darker (dark brown or black) - it would be better to darken them. Thirdly, the hairstyle is unclear; more light and shadow, highlights, and it would be okay. Fourthly, the neck: it's very thin and long, it wouldn't be able to hold such a large head in reality. Fifthly, the shoulders and arms, maybe she's that muscular, but the contour of the muscles should have been drawn better, because they don't look very good, they are too thick, and then, the right shoulder is longer than the left. Furthermore, the torso is strange, too short, and I don't see any hips at all; the legs are located as if they are growing not from the pelvis, but from the stomach. I don't like the butt, it's too square; female butts are usually depicted more rounded. I won't say anything about the short legs and unclear feet... Accessories. Metal. Yes, the buckle on the belt is drawn well, the chains hang unrealistically; in general, I would say that all the metal in the picture needs good highlights, light and shadow. Otherwise, the weapon looks like rubber or plastic with a glossy coating O_o... Shadows. I don't see any decent shadows at all! It's not clear where the light is coming from. The author made a large shadow, supposedly from the sword (saber, I don't know what it's called) between the heroine's legs. It's unsuccessful! Such a shadow cannot exist! And then, there is a shadow from the sword, but there are no shadows from the heroine and the dagger... Either the author forgot to draw the rest of the shadows, or he simply couldn't draw the area between the legs.
Conclusion: the drawing is flat.
#3.Well, it's not bad. Only the dragon's neck and the lack of the same bright light and shadow on it and on the lower jaw bother me. It's not clear where the neck begins. Again, light and shadow. It's not clear where the light is coming from.
#4.Phew, I won't write about humans, because it will be not a comment, but a lecture on the structure of the human body ;) The tiger is okay, only there are no knees and elbows. The fingers on the paws are very small. Author! Have mercy on such a large tiger! He won't be able to run on such paws :( ;). Plus, the background is good.
#5.I won't talk about the body, it's clear why. The idea is not bad, I like the titan's pose. Plus, again, the background is good, although I would paint the sky blue ;) You need to work on the anatomy and the technique of shading with colored pencils. ;). Light and shadow.
#6.Head, chest, shoulders, everything seems to be in place :) Only, indeed, the rotation of the hand didn't work out. More highlights on the gold. More light and shadow on the precious stones and hair. ;)
It's hard to choose. Because I know how difficult it is to draw a person... and I can imagine how difficult it is to draw a person and an animal (!)... and even in a snowy forest (!)... I GIVE MY VOTE TO WORK #4!!!
P.S. It's a pity that it's not in color. ;)
