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I actually like the biography, but the ability name doesn't quite fit, in my opinion. It seems to be derived from the biography, but I'd prefer it to be based on the character's specialization. Although, sometimes I'd like to see more villains, as they all seem to be good guys :)
I would make a small change to the biography; "carrying a LOT of enemy blood on his blade" doesn't sound very good, but I haven't come up with anything better yet...
Свяжи грифону крылья, и он взлетит, махая лапами.
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What about this idea for a specialization? After a battle, the hero "captures" a portion of the enemy army (essentially, he can replenish his army with some of the enemy creatures he killed). Although, it's quite similar to necromancy.
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What about this idea for a specialization? After a battle, the hero "captures" part of the enemy army (essentially, he can replenish his army with a portion of the enemy creatures he killed). Although, it's quite similar to necromancy.
There will be too many unnecessary, non-native creatures in the army. It will be very inconvenient to manage them.
And if the opponent is just a hero, it's not very applicable.

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I would slightly correct the biography, it doesn't sound very good to say "carrying a LOT of enemy blood on his blade," but I haven't come up with anything better yet...
We'll wait for the final, corrected version.
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There will be many unnecessary, non-native creatures in the army. It will be very inconvenient to manage them.
In general, the concept of the hero (dark elf) in my mind was that the "extra" creatures go to the elven sacrificial altar.
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Final version: When Shagrat was young, his father died in war, and his mother was taken prisoner. Before his death, his father swore to avenge his family and complete his mission. Winning the war and saving his mother is his main goal. With each battle won, his desire for victory grows exponentially. Any adventurer will be very unlucky if they encounter Shagrat, whose blade carries the blood of thousands of fallen enemies.
Свяжи грифону крылья, и он взлетит, махая лапами.
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In general, the concept of the hero (dark elf) in my mind was that "extra" creatures go to the elven altar.
1) The elven altar is a completely useless building that doesn't provide any real benefit.
2) After each battle, you'll have to send a cockroach to carry the creatures back to the base, which is not ideal.

p.s. This mod will be followed by another mod with new buildings in the cities, where some of the old, useless ones will also be reworked. For example, in the AG mod, the dark elf altar additionally provides mana at the beginning of the day if the hero is near the Castle. Furthermore, the plan is to instantly add a growth bonus just by building the altar, and a more interesting bonus.

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Final version:
When Shagrat was young, his father died in war, and
his mother was taken prisoner. Before
his father's death, he swore
to avenge his family and
complete his mission.
To win the war and save
his mother is his main goal, and
with each battle won,
his desire for victory
increases many times over. And
every opportunist will be very
unlucky if they meet
Shagrat, carrying on his
blade the blood of a thousand
defeated enemies.
Close repetition of the same words ("each"). Incorrect punctuation.
I also have some bios that were written haphazardly, but since this version is final (and mine are not), it should be written as well as possible.

p.s. I thought it would be a poem at first... but no, it's just aligned to the left :)
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Where?? Where is the incorrect punctuation? Perhaps only in one sentence, a dash should be replaced with a comma, but everything else is fine. I somehow didn't notice the repetition of "each," I'll figure out how to fix it...

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 I've updated the post above with the final version.
Свяжи грифону крылья, и он взлетит, махая лапами.
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Where?? Where is the incorrect punctuation? Perhaps in one sentence, a dash should be replaced with a comma, but everything else is fine. I somehow didn't notice the repetition of "each," I'll figure out how to fix it...
You'll write the final version, and we'll take a look; the sentences might change then. But in general, a proofreader wouldn't hurt for the mod. :)

Maybe see his mother again? Save her, although it would be better to free her; this is suitable for a specific enemy. And what is the task after all: save his mother or win the war? What war? When his father was killed, he also somehow ended up in a war; how did he have time to swear an oath?

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Something like this:

The Empire's punitive forces were burning down the orcs' temporary camps as they rapidly left the continent. One foggy night was stained with Elrat's punitive sword and brought hundreds of deaths. In front of the young orc, his fearless father was defeated, and his mother was taken captive. Swearing revenge on humans, Shagrat grew into an excellent warrior, rushing headlong at any enemy. Hoping to see his mother again someday, the orc destroyed many slave traders' dens, raided the Duchies of the Bull and the Wolf, but all in vain: they say that the unfortunate son is still searching for his own kin...
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I like everything except for "after swearing, he grew up." I suggest replacing it with "he swore. A few years later, he grew up."
 

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Your description doesn't include any ability links, which is not ideal.
Свяжи грифону крылья, и он взлетит, махая лапами.
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Your description doesn't have any links to abilities, which isn't good.
First of all, this is not a description of an ability, but a biography. Secondly, I just specified (linked the story to a real event for Ashan, defined the revenge and geography), therefore, it is logical that this is also missing in what you presented. You are contradicting yourself.

Although there is an excuse for this:

Example:
Frida's biography: Frida, an aristocrat by birth, was raised by her strict but caring father as a warrior. From birth, she was prepared to serve the Griffin Empire. Frida fought in the War of Queen Isabel, proving herself on the battlefield; usually, her victories were based on swift and unexpected maneuvers.

Special ability: Each time the hero casts a Light magic spell, a random enemy unit is affected by the "Divine Vengeance" spell (of course, if this unit has already killed at least one creature).

There is no connection here...
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Frida isn't a great example, as her special ability has changed, but her biography remains the same. Previously, if I'm not mistaken, her special ability was speed-related, similar to Mive.
 

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Frida isn't a good example, as her specialization changed, but her biography remained the same. Previously, her specialization, if I'm not mistaken, was on acceleration, like Miv's.
The biography also changed ;) It was different.
And the main point of the message is something else.
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Secondly, I merely specified (tied the story to a real event for Ashan, defined the revenge and geography), therefore, it is logical that what you presented also lacks this. You are contradicting yourself.
There is no connection here...
And what is this?
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with each battle won,
his desire for victory
increases many times over.
Isn't this a connection to an ability?
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Isn't it tied to the ability?
The desire to win doesn't necessarily mean an increase in attack power. It's about boosting morale.
I've elaborated on the biography you provided, and in it, there's no connection to the ability itself.
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Путешествие , Условие крови , Рука судьбы.Часть 1: В поход , Рука судьбы.Часть 2: Отчаянье , Рука судьбы.Часть 3: Восхождение , Стойкость
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