NHF – new heroes for Heroes V 3.1.

Where?? Where is the incorrect punctuation? Perhaps in one sentence, a dash should be replaced with a comma, but everything else is fine. I somehow didn't notice the repetition of "each," I'll figure out how to fix it...

You'll write the final version, and we'll take a look; the sentences might change then. But in general, a proofreader wouldn't hurt for the mod. :)

Maybe see his mother again? Save her, although it would be better to free her; this is suitable for a specific enemy. And what is the task after all: save his mother or win the war? What war? When his father was killed, he also somehow ended up in a war; how did he have time to swear an oath?

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Something like this:

The Empire's punitive forces were burning down the orcs' temporary camps as they rapidly left the continent. One foggy night was stained with Elrat's punitive sword and brought hundreds of deaths. In front of the young orc, his fearless father was defeated, and his mother was taken captive. Swearing revenge on humans, Shagrat grew into an excellent warrior, rushing headlong at any enemy. Hoping to see his mother again someday, the orc destroyed many slave traders' dens, raided the Duchies of the Bull and the Wolf, but all in vain: they say that the unfortunate son is still searching for his own kin...