How to become a dragon.

You know, I just started reading it, and it seemed pretty well-written. There are just a lot of typos; you need to do a major cleanup.
By the way, I reread that thread, and the work wasn't criticized at all. There were just a few minor comments about the names, but overall, it was even praised.
Perhaps it would be a good idea to merge these two threads, since they are about the same thing.