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You know, I just started reading it, and it seemed pretty well-written. There are just a lot of typos; you need to do a major cleanup.
By the way, I reread that thread, and the work wasn't criticized at all. There were just a few minor comments about the names, but overall, it was even praised.
Perhaps it would be a good idea to merge these two threads, since they are about the same thing.

Well, thank you.
You know, I'm a complete newbie when it comes to editing this forum. So, if a moderator decides to merge threads, I won't object.

I read the first part. It was very interesting, and the plot kept me hooked. I didn't even expect such an ending. I'll read the second part and let you know.

and how do you like the second one?

The second part was also captivating and kept me hooked. However, towards the end, the plot became less engaging; of course, the unexpected location of the Grail provided some amusement. Overall, the second part was also interesting and exciting, but not as much as the first.

Thank you for the time you spent reading my book; I hope you don’t think it was time wasted.