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Posts from Expedition: general discussions.Auto-translated
So what's the big deal? If such mistakes ruin the mood and the desire to play (or if there wasn't much desire to begin with), that's one thing. But if that's not the case, you can just take a time-out, recalculate, it's not that hard. As for the mechanic – if it turned out to be complex and unsuccessful, it's worth either passing it on to someone else, or writing a program like Shaman did to make the calculations easier, or just not bother with it at all. IMHO.
It's one thing to write a single quest for a character, and quite another to provide comprehensive information about the world and the game.
^ And in general, the literary aspect has always been quite good. Your texts are easy to read, but they don't contain any obvious narrative or stylistic errors. Believe me, Revan, in today's world, there are hundreds, if not thousands, of "writers" who write much worse and still make a lot of money from their pulp novels. I'm worse off in this regard than you are. I constantly notice that I don't know how to construct sentences in the most effective way; they are either too long and overloaded, or, conversely, too short, which ultimately creates an effect of disjointedness and abruptness.
On the other hand, even the small snippets of text that I provided for reading were read by two people, so maybe it was a dead idea from the very beginning.
No, you had walls of text, I had snippets. It seems Arandor was also complaining that there was too little to read. When I was reading Salvatore's "The Outcast," it seemed to me that your texts were much better written. But here, it's probably a matter of translation. Overall, they are decent texts.
Небо – мольбы не ждёт Небо – угроз не слышит Небо – ведёт особый счёт Небо – тебя найдёт
It's very pleasant to read your positive feedback, but for me, the fact remains that what was written fell far short of what I wanted. I wanted it to be something that would really grab you, something you'd read and immediately feel immersed in the country or some other concept, but not just from halfway through a paragraph. I think the problem lies in the fact that I haven't read much in recent years, and what I have read has been in English.
Anyway, I don't think Gerich, Vistritka, or Loken would have had such difficulties when conducting experiments.
It's very nice to read your positive feedback, but for me, the fact remains that what was written was far from what I wanted.
I don't communicate much with writers; I communicate more with artists (a lot). And I constantly hear this phrase from them, yeah. Although, in my amateur opinion, the drawings are excellent, but... there is no limit to perfection. So everything is fine, that's how it should be. Azuchi
I wanted it to be so that when you read it, you would be immediately captivated by the country or some other concept, but not from halfway through the paragraph. I think the problem is that I haven't read much in recent years, and what I have read is in English.
Well, yes, the more you read, the higher your writing skill. But the more you write, the higher your writing skill becomes too. Conclusion: more experience - higher skill. Even worse, skills that are not used in practice for at least six months deteriorate or disappear altogether.
Added 12 minutes later And I agree with the Heroes player about writing in English. Here, you need to understand that you will be answered in Russian. And technical details need to be written (or duplicated) in Russian. So, as a result, something strange may turn out. But a story in English - why not.
..разым двазым трызым рызым пята лата сигерь мата локом боком крюк за крюк из бульмы бульма урюк.. Знание некоторых закономерностей освобождает от изучения многих фактов. Мечты сбываются рано или поздно, так или иначе.
I think it's a joke. For a resident of the CIS, it's inherently more difficult to write texts in literary English, no matter how many books they've read... Unless it's in the style of Shakespeare and Carroll, and their style has truly "taken root" in their mind.