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You know, I just started reading it, and it seemed pretty well-written. There are just a lot of typos; you need to do a major cleanup.
By the way, I reread that thread, and the work wasn't criticized at all. There were just a few minor comments about the names, but overall, it was even praised.
Perhaps it would be a good idea to merge these two threads, since they are about the same thing.
By the way, I reread that thread, and the work wasn't criticized at all. There were just a few minor comments about the names, but overall, it was even praised.
Perhaps it would be a good idea to merge these two threads, since they are about the same thing.
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Well, thank you.
You know, I'm a complete newbie when it comes to editing this forum. So, if a moderator decides to merge threads, I won't object.
You know, I'm a complete newbie when it comes to editing this forum. So, if a moderator decides to merge threads, I won't object.
Силос Занж
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I read the first part. It was very interesting, and the plot kept me hooked. I didn't even expect such an ending. I'll read the second part and let you know.
Наш мир полон тайн и чудес.
Многие их ищут, многим они вовсе не нужны, а многие даже не замечают их, не понимают что они вокруг нас, каждый день, везде.
А эти чудеса порой, сокрыты в обычных, привычных предметах.
Многие их ищут, многим они вовсе не нужны, а многие даже не замечают их, не понимают что они вокруг нас, каждый день, везде.
А эти чудеса порой, сокрыты в обычных, привычных предметах.
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and how do you like the second one?
Силос Занж
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The second part was also captivating and kept me hooked. However, towards the end, the plot became less engaging; of course, the unexpected location of the Grail provided some amusement. Overall, the second part was also interesting and exciting, but not as much as the first.
Наш мир полон тайн и чудес.
Многие их ищут, многим они вовсе не нужны, а многие даже не замечают их, не понимают что они вокруг нас, каждый день, везде.
А эти чудеса порой, сокрыты в обычных, привычных предметах.
Многие их ищут, многим они вовсе не нужны, а многие даже не замечают их, не понимают что они вокруг нас, каждый день, везде.
А эти чудеса порой, сокрыты в обычных, привычных предметах.
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Thank you for the time you spent reading my book; I hope you don’t think it was time wasted.
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