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Not a bad idea :) It just needs some serious and thorough refinement. Here are some points that I have some reservations about:
- Instead of dancers, you should come up with something more original. I don't mind if the second-level elf unit is traditional for Heroes of Might and Magic 5, but it still needs to be a more interesting character ;) For example, let him wield two knives, maybe magical ones.
- Are almost all the units elves? There are plenty of other creatures :) Here, choose to your heart's content: Here. This will definitely not harm the race.
- The race is mainly magical, which is fine. But first, you need to create at least a semblance of balance with other races (in theory, let's say), and second, you need to think more carefully about the race's style and then stick to a consistent style.
- Does the race worship multiple dragons at once? If you really want to, you can choose one dragon as the head of the pantheon of gods and come up with other gods. There's nothing wrong with that :) For example, the orcs in "Lords of Chaos" didn't believe in dragons, and the shamans (yes, blatant advertising for my own race) also have their own gods.
- The race's skill clearly needs to be renamed, because enhancing Chaos is not harmony, but an overpowered ability. By the way, given the diverse magical abilities of the units, you should think more carefully about the skill. Why Chaos specifically? And it has already been noted that the Dark Elves specialize in Chaos. You can come up with your own school of magic, as in the case of the orcs and dwarves (in my opinion, the orcs' magic is just called something else, but in principle it's almost the same), but that would be too much.
- The name is primarily associated with WoW, even for me, although I haven't played it. Conclusion: I advise you to rename it.
Well, that's all for now. In principle, the race can exist, but it needs a lot of work to bring it to at least the level of a fully developed idea, let alone a potential mod.
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