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In short, I decided to create a story about heroes. The idea is simple: I start writing the text, and the next person continues it, and so on. We should only write about Heroes 3, without involving other parts of the series. The characters in the legend can be either the heroes themselves or the units. The names of places can be invented. The size of each message has no limits. The continuation of the story depends on each last entry. To avoid misunderstandings, it is advisable not to do anything like: "Instead, I would write this continuation - ...". Otherwise, confusion may arise. If you want to create a different continuation and offer your version, send it to me in a private message with a note indicating the number of the message you want to replace. In case of replacement, the text will look like this with a note indicating the replaced message number, and the story will continue from that point. :smile01:
I hope you like this idea:smile02:

Well, I'll start:

LEGEND OF HEROES


Long ago, in the times of the gods, in the times of great battles, in the times when small peasant children grew up to become great knights, forever glorified in the forests of Myre, the great god of nature, lived an elf named Zark. The young elf, 18 years old, felt like a protector of life in his forest. Zark was talented and skilled from birth. When Zark was only 7 years old, he and his faithful wolf, Dix, defended the honor of their estate during an attack by bandits. Not afraid of the 3 thugs, he crafted a trap from bamboo and ordered Dix to bark. When the bandits ran out to see what was making the dog bark, 2 of them fell into the trap, and the third was struck dead by an arrow that hit him right in the forehead. According to elven customs, any male elf who reaches adulthood must go to learn the art of war. But these customs had long been forgotten in Myre. Zark, taking experience from a wise man who lived nearby, and drawing knowledge from books, firmly decided to go and study. Zark tried to convince the rest of his brethren to go with him in search of other elves, in order to gain experience and fight for the good, but no one listened to him. Zark took his bow, made arrows, wove a quiver, and, after saying goodbye to everyone, set off on his journey alone. But then, a familiar bark sounded behind him. Zark realized that, well, he certainly wouldn't be bored now:smile03:
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Horror. My friend, you should at least check the spelling in Word, or something... And the bamboo stalk completely floored me.
Слово "РАСА" пишется с одной буквой С.
В слове ВОИН нет буквы Й.
Пять восклицательных знаков в конце каждого предложения - признак подростковых комплексов.
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Well, I don't look at the text when I'm typing. If something's wrong, I'll just close the topic. Is the text really that bad?:(
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Well, how can I put it... Half of all bad fantasy stories start like that, and end with the hero destroying half the world. It's monotonous.
Слово "РАСА" пишется с одной буквой С.
В слове ВОИН нет буквы Й.
Пять восклицательных знаков в конце каждого предложения - признак подростковых комплексов.
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The beginning is like any other beginning, and it seems a bit banal; it needs some unique element added later on!
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Honestly, it’s better not to have any “further” development.
Слово "РАСА" пишется с одной буквой С.
В слове ВОИН нет буквы Й.
Пять восклицательных знаков в конце каждого предложения - признак подростковых комплексов.
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Come on, don't get upset. Maybe something amazing will come out of it!
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Come on, the person felt a creative urge. Let them write))) I experience the same thing. If there was a special thread where everyone could express their creativity, what's wrong with that?
But it seems a bit lacking... it's hard to judge anything based on the introduction... come on, TMNT, keep writing and don't pay attention to anyone)))) By the way, the main character, Zark, could be renamed to Zyrk, as in, an archery expert.

I had the same idea... I think it would be perfect for this thread.
Who didn't love reading the biographies of heroes in the game info? There was always a desire for more complete stories that reveal the hero. If Fiona was a circus performer, why not make the beast master, Bron, a former zoo director who was bitten by a rabid viverna and now, suffering from rabies, has retreated with his menagerie to the swamps of Tatalia)))))))))
Of course, this is just a joke!
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Why are you so categorical about everything? It's a good idea... I liked it, and I'll definitely continue it when I have time.
:smile02:Клан "Lost Heroes" - Заместитель лидера:smile02:
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_Prizrak_;144746
Why are you so categorical about everything? It's a good idea... I liked it, and I'll definitely continue it when I have time ;)
Categorical, you say?
Well, we'll be waiting for your continuation!
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Finally, some good feedback. And as for the zoo director, you, Kirill, really gave him a hard time!
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I'm looking forward to the continuation of this epic! Come up with something else.
In reply to Dracon Малласа
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I like the story idea :) , but here's a suggestion regarding the "readability" of the text - the name Zark is mentioned too often at the beginning of each sentence (I read it several times - it sounds a bit awkward). I suggest rearranging or replacing it with some kind of nickname. That's it.
I'm also thinking about a continuation!!! :smile01:
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Okay, the proposal is accepted. What nickname should we give it?
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continue writing the story, don’t focus on the title. it’s interesting!

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