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Death to Pops, I have a couple of comments regarding the Pandora map.
The mages who join at the beginning of the game should be positioned a bit further away; otherwise, they attack at the end of the turn if the hero is nearby. The outcome of my battle with the mages: "Everyone died!" ;)
The quest with the magic shop needs to be moved down a bit; otherwise, griffins attack. Also, the dialogues need to be separated by spaces to remove the "[]" icon.
I suggest increasing the initial guard for the "Magic Fist" scroll to 9 wolves.
There is also some ambiguity in the scenario regarding where to go and what to do; this needs to be adjusted.
Also, I practically didn't use the conservatories and sanctuaries of other schools of magic, except for Haven; maybe I'm just developing along the wrong path (at most, I bought level 1 spells).
I'm still playing; if anything else comes up, I'll let you know.