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You can look at everything else from different angles, but I just can't help but comment on this: what a nightmare!
Owen, think about it yourself. Where were you offended? About your mother? You yourself said that she is your internet limiter; Heroist just repeated it. The problem wasn't that your real life limits your internet time (this is perfectly normal; most people are in the same situation, unable to spend hours on the forum for various reasons), but that you were essentially the only one who tried to use this fact to justify the shortcomings of your set in response to criticism. That's not good. Just say, "I have little time, but it will be better later." That's enough; everyone does that.
And Heroist is absolutely right about the descriptions. Can't you copy? Why did you decide that? In my Avatar-based mafia game, I created the introduction based on the opening scene from the cartoon. But if you copy, either you choose small but concise quotes that immediately make everything clear (for example, if I were working on a set for Amber, I could use Corvin's thoughts about their strengths as descriptions for the roles), or you create a mix of your own description and quotes from the book. It's definitely not worth copying the entire book here (well, not the whole thing, but you get my point). If I misinterpreted your intentions and you were going to do as I advise you now, then I apologize.
Regarding violence, additions, and all that... People can be understood for being taken aback by it. We sometimes say a sharp word, but resorting to threats is too much. You are wrong about this, Owen. And in general, be more calm. Often, you respond negatively to completely neutral posts, as far as I can see. Yes, a large number of criticisms of your work can be discouraging. But keep it to yourself; the only problem people have here is that they write a lot and often. This may be a little unpleasant for you (well, what can you do, there's one GM, but many consumers, and everyone wants to have their say), but if you allow yourself to respond negatively, that's when all the bad stuff will start. People will just be surprised: "I didn't write anything like that; why is he so upset?" Well, you get the idea. Take it easy, and people will be drawn to you.