The Tale of Igor's Campaign

1) There is still the possibility of landing the main character not on the ramp, but near the mercury workshop (when returning home in the finale) - the mission will not end without returning to the ramp (because a battle with Okhtar is needed to complete it, as I understand);

2) The quest with the goblin Pinkot is also available for the red player (the script should only be addressed to the yellow player; then we won't see these meaningless dialogues);

3) It would be good to add a mentor in the starting location (with guards, of course), and also something else to gain enough experience to reach level 20;

4) The 2nd and subsequent videos have no text dialogues - what the orcs are saying is a big secret.