Silver Persimmon

I don't really see the sun.

Well, it perfectly matches the conditions – a girl in the background. So, during a total solar eclipse, the moon is in the background, obscuring the sun, and the latter ☀️ may be almost invisible... But it's clear where it is from the halo and other things...

on, not in.

The glasses are worn by the girl, so it's "on." It's not said that they are worn on the eyes – you can put gloves on your heels (old-timers know), and glasses – on your forehead... It's funny that Rev sent this, on a topic that he himself came up with.

On the one hand, it's really not easy to vote in this contest, and in many others lately. I understand the search for formal factors so that it's possible to lower or raise the score. But, in my opinion, attempts to accuse something of being off-topic kill a considerable part of the imagination in the competition, because you start thinking not about sending something more interesting, but about making sure that no one thinks something is wrong... When voting in the current one, I didn't even raise the issue of the topic, because I assume in favor of the person who submitted it, and I didn't see any obvious violations. It's not that I'm setting myself as an example, because I have my own "peculiarities," Nebok, don't be offended, I have nothing against your alt-submission.