☀️ Arselia and Akonia

Alaria extends a reddish text.

With burning eyes, she examines the song.

-- I think it's excellent. To fall in love so deeply, for centuries, ha-ha, it's always nice to see romantic themes. Mmm, maybe you should also submit your song to the ministry? It's on a somewhat related topic, but only slightly, plus, for greater modesty, you could somehow cleverly arrange it, like for a "permission to perform," considering that... the theme is important to the state. But there's a good chance that we can bring Lady Asukan even more pleasure, and Carneol will be honored.

To be honest, I'm not entirely sure about the verse about Kanade.

-- What's wrong with it?