Thank you for your feedback on my humble work. Yes, there are many spelling and punctuation errors (very many) because I typed it manually, and in that version of the editor, it was practically impossible to insert a comma. Unfortunately, it is not possible to copy text from Word into the Heroes II editor (unlike, for example, the Heroes III editor), so I blushed a lot while watching YouTube videos.
P.S. Later, this map was included (with corrections) in the cycle of adventures of Sir de Aout (part 4, where the plot has been slightly reinterpreted) (/topic/14853/).