Rhyme — Everything about everything.

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Rapper

10.3% 4 votes

Okay

35.9% 14 votes

So so

15.4% 6 votes

Well, maybe I can help with something

12.8% 5 votes

One, two, three, four, five. I’ve been friends with rhyme since childhood!

25.6% 10 votes

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GvozD

19 years ago

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RedB;67289

yo-yo-yo)) we don't care that everything around
everything will be cool - let's say om (from Kirpichi)
I'm for world peace)) smile wider
I don't mind repeating about the trousers
under them, own drawers are visible in all directions))
and generally it's time to stop adopting the fashion of American poverty))
maybe the girls will start paying attention)))

However!!! The armored forces are advancing in a wedge (what else is that formation called?)

You can even kick me for the lousy poem,
But I'm no loser, my voice hasn't faded!
So just know that girls dig it,
when a guy reads to them in rap style,
About his love, about the sunset of the day
And about how you are only for me.

RedB

19 years ago

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it's pleasant to listen to at sunset in any format))
when a guy can say it like that
as if painting a picture with words
in general, it's a five out of five))
next, a word that rhymes with "bed"
but we won't use it))
P.S. and tanks don't move in a wedge formation...

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GvozD

19 years ago

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RedB;67319

it's pleasant to hear about the sunset in any format))
when a guy knows how to speak
as if painting a picture with words
in general, it's a five))
next comes the word bed for the rhyme
but we won't use it))
P.S. and tanks don't walk in wedges...

Of course they don't walk, they drive!:)
And why "not use" as soon as it comes to a bed?
Rap is not love, nor wine, nor pain
For some, it's the very salt of life.
For you it's something else, and I have my own path.
Now imagine how someone could be kicked
Just because he isn't like you,
And his dreams are a different color.

Machete

19 years ago

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If I do write rap, it's only as a parody, it has neither meaning nor rhyme, something like this...

Saruman

19 years ago

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Tanks move in a wedge formation!
It's a shame not to know that!
One could add another rhyme,
If one knew how to rhyme!

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GvozD

19 years ago

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Saruman;67467

Tanks move in a wedge formation!
It's a shame not to know that!
You could add another rhyme,
If you knew how to rhyme!

The girl isn't ashamed. But if you were asked about hair dye, would you be ashamed or not because you don't know the answer?

Machete

19 years ago

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Today I'm playing the role of a mafia boss,
I'm here to portray it,
give me a ban hammer –
and I'll ban everyone!

Budda

19 years ago

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The internet (boarding school) is a wonderful thing,
this topic is full of nonsense and chatter,
and I'm not doing very well,
sometimes there's chatter, sometimes there isn't.

Added 5 minutes later
In the "CHATTER" or rather "PSYCHO" topic, Chernok said the following:
I'm a psycho, and that's all there is to it.
P.S.Warlock, you're not a psycho. If you were, you wouldn't admit it.

RedB

19 years ago

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Budda, what's the point of that?
I don't understand.
And about the tanks - yes, I agree.
Well, I was wrong - it's not a big deal.

Machete

19 years ago

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Budd, I don't mind, but this isn't the right topic. Here, everyone posts in verse. If a wise thought comes to mind, you should write it down immediately in the philosophy section. It might not rhyme, but that's how it usually is.

Dr gIVI

19 years ago

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Yeah, guess who's here? It's me! Didn't expect me, did you? I came to the forum So you wouldn't get bored. Yo, yo!!!

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Смок

19 years ago

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Dr gIVI;68200

Yeah, guess who's here?
It's me! Didn't expect me?
I came to the forum
So you wouldn't get bored.
Yo, yo!!!

Where's the rhyme?
Where's the rap?
You're not a cool dude,
We're not bored here yet,
But we were waiting for you too,
What's with this stupid intro,
This "Yo yo yo",
It doesn't fit into any framework,
It doesn't suit us at all,
You better read something,
And write something,
So that rhymes and words,
Come together and fit in,
And don't annoy me,
With the incoherence of your verse...

If you're going to write, then write like this:

Guess who's here,
You didn't expect me?
I came to our forum,
So you wouldn't get bored...

Dr gIVI

19 years ago

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Listen, Smoke, if I couldn't do something,
Then don't act all high and mighty, you're not perfect either.
Everyone makes mistakes in life,
It's not right to immediately criticize them all.
But put yourself in their shoes – wouldn't you like that?
I know one thing: not everyone can handle criticism,
But I'm not like that, listen up,
Next time, don't act all high and mighty!!!

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Смок

19 years ago

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Dr gIVI;68249

Listen, Smoke, if I couldn't do something,
Then don't show off here, you're not a superhero either.
Everyone makes mistakes in life,
We're all quick to criticize them.
But put yourself in their shoes – do you like it?
I know one thing: not everyone can handle criticism,
But I'm not like that, listen to me,
Next time, don't show off!!!

I don't need this kind of boasting,
It's completely unnecessary,
I'm just stating facts,
But you know how to write,
You just need a topic.
Try reading something useful,
Like in Old School,
For starters, everything is easier there,
And it will be much simpler,
Well, go ahead,
Don't be offended,
We'll keep communicating...

Machete

19 years ago

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when |:) :cool: | :smile23: :smile44: :smile44:
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