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How did you like the story?
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I really liked it
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Good
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66.7% 6 votes
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Online now Arandor
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Basically, I've set up a thread for sharing opinions about the short story and added a poll. Only those who have already read it should vote!

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The beginning is fun and engaging, but then it devolves into another generic heroic fantasy story with journeys, artifacts, and battles against an ancient evil.
My sword, my trusted ally, unphased by my aspect.
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The "ancient spirit" aspect is specifically mentioned as something that is mocked in World of Warcraft. So, you need to tone down the seriousness of your story.

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the beginning is good, then it's mediocre, so why should I vote for it?)

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it devolved into another heroic fantasy with journeys, artifacts, and battles with some ancient evil.
facepalm, this is a joke -_-
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whatever you want.

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And what is the joke beyond a couple of funny lines and using real names of notorious forum trolls? Is it just about running back and forth?
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What's the joke here?
heroic fantasy with journeys, artifacts, and battles against ancient evil.
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Lord of the Rings is a very satirical fantasy; I laughed a lot.
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Don't be a troll! I already wrote to you.
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Too "serious" for a fairy tale, too "unserious" for fantasy. Something in between, a blurred picture, colors running together, jumbled emotions. In general, that's how it turns out for everyone who picks up a pen for the first time.
Tomorrow holds no promises
Except the ones we've made
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It’s as if you were expecting “The Lord of the Rings,” really. Ara tried, and he did a pretty good job.
 

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Almost fell asleep. We need more horror, more horror.
Смысла нет, но вы держитесь там. Удачи, здоровья, хорошего настроения!
И пока в кармане пачка милкиуэйев - значит все не так уж плохо на сегодняшний день
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It's like you were expecting "The Lord of the Rings," really. Ara tried, and it turned out pretty well.
Come on, say what's cool, the pinnacle of skill, and always write that way, Arko!
I wasn't expecting "The Lord of the Rings," I saw what I expected, it's okay, it'll do.
Almost fell asleep. Need more horror, more horror.
Horror for the masses.
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Except the ones we've made
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Ar, try again, yes. The story turned out strange – first it was satirical, and then it became serious. It's better to think everything through first, and then write. And yes, check the spelling in Word :3
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