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Desert-tombs-creatures living in them! The city looks like a desert with a large, blunt pyramid, a mountain with a passage, and a nomad camp nearby! 1. Scarabs (large, about 50, 50% protection from arrows and dark magic) 1. Black Scarabs (same as above + weakening on hit) 1. Sarcophagus Scarabs (same as above + a certain number of mummies appear in the place of killed creatures) 2. Mummies (undead) 2. Ancient Mummies (undead, curse) 2. Mummy Guardians (undead) 3. Sand Warriors (knowledge of the sands) 3. Sand Archers (knowledge of the sands, archers) 3. Sun Cult Warriors (knowledge of the sands, (ability to hit ghosts with 100% accuracy)) 4. Scorpions (poison) 4. Black Scorpions (poison + weakness) 4. Underground Scorpions (poison, protection from earth magic, underground tunnels) 5. Nomads (large creature, knowledge of the sands) 5. Sand Cavalry (large creature, knowledge of the sands) 5. Sun Cult Cavalry (large creature, knowledge of the sands, (ability to hit ghosts with 100% accuracy)) 6. Guardians (large creature, undead, quicksand) 6. Tomb Guardians (large creature, undead, quicksand) 6. Pharaoh's Defenders (large creature, undead, raise skeletons, hates humans) 7. Humanoid Scorpions (large creature) 7. Scorpion Kings (large creature, throwing spear, protection from arrows) 7. Dead Scorpion Kings (large creature, undead, curse, plague) Special ability - knowledge of the sands, it is already being developed and will be written about later!)

There is nothing about heroes and buildings.

Ah, yes, of course, and also the buildings. I'll rewrite everything from scratch and post it here soon!

Yes, the faction needs to be described in more detail, because we only have the names and abilities of the creatures, so it's impossible to judge the faction fully. I'll say this: Not bad, but IMO, undead should be the exclusive domain of Necropolis, although in this context, it looks interesting.

We need to describe the race in more detail, describe the heroes and their main specialization, and what benefits it provides, and we shouldn't forget about the super ability (although this can be explained later). Also, the idea itself seems pretty good, especially considering that those who can attack ghosts won't be a hindrance. So, I think the concept is good:D.