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Offline SandroXXL
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Go ahead and share it: we'll check it out, discuss it, refine it, correct it, and help you with anything. If someone has seriously decided to write a book (and has even written one!), we need to help them!
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Go ahead, post it: we'll check it out, discuss it, refine it, correct it, and help you with something. Since someone has seriously decided to write a book (and even wrote one!), we need to help!
You can forgive me, but it's better not to. I have some problems with it.
Firstly, it's written in Ukrainian, as I only communicate in Russian here.:)
Secondly, you might start laughing.:D This is the first time I've written anything. It's not very good yet.:) But when I started writing Hammers of Fate, it went better.
Thirdly, I'm currently still writing scenarios that complement the campaign. Among them are "New Enemies" - Faydaen, "Temptation" - Zehir, "In Search of Power" - Vaer, and "Alliance" - Giovanni. This is like a continuation of the campaign. Since there were no campaigns for elves, mages, demons, and necromancers in Hammers of Fate.
At the beginning of the book, I included the history of all the races that are on this site and images of all the main characters of the campaigns I wrote about. The book doesn't have spectacular battles, as there were many of them. And I don't think it would be interesting to read anyway.:rolleyes:
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Oh, is it possible to post it here? I'd like to read it! And by the way, making a book is definitely possible, as I said – they've already made books about Forgotten Realms and Dragonlance, and there's the Demilich website with anthologies.
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I'm also from Ukraine. It would be interesting to read it!!! Please post it!!
P.S. I won't laugh!!!!!!
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I have to say that yesterday I was driving home from Moscow, and to pass the time, I wrote a short story about Heroes 5. It's not very good and only about 6 pages long in my notebook, but at least the time flew by.
Step aside from the way of a better man than you
So you fall at his feet hes the one who betrays you
Its the servants devotion for the decay
Stand up

There are no flowers on your grave
There are no chains
There I keep chanting for the forgotten name © Amorphis
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3DogMZA;103615
You can forgive me, but it's better not to. I have some issues with it.
Firstly, it's written in Ukrainian, as I only communicate in Russian here.:)
Secondly, you might even laugh.:D This is the first time I'm writing something. It's not very good yet.:) But when I started writing about Hammers of Fate, it went better.
Thirdly, I'm currently finishing up scenarios that complement the campaign. Among them are "New Enemies" - Faydaen, "Temptation" - Zehir, "In Search of Power" - Vaer, and "Alliance" - Giovanni. This is like a continuation of the campaign, as there were no campaigns for elves, mages, demons, and necromancers in Hammers of Fate.
At the beginning of the book, I included the history of all the races that are on this site and images of all the main characters of the campaigns I wrote about. The book doesn't have many spectacular battles, as there were already a lot of them. And I don't think it would be interesting to read anyway.:rolleyes:

It's interesting to read, go ahead, show it)
Ukrainian is not a problem, there are many people from there here)))
I'm very curious)
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3DogMZA;103615
You can forgive me, but it's better not to. I have problems with it.
Firstly, it's written in Ukrainian, as I only communicate in Russian here.:)
Secondly, you'll probably laugh.:D This is the first time I'm writing something. It's not very good yet.:) But when I started writing Hammers of Fate, it got better.
Thirdly, I'm currently finishing up scenarios that complement the campaign. Among them are "New Enemies" - Faydaen, "Temptation" - Zehir, "In Search of Power" - Vaer, and "Alliance" - Giovanni. This is like a continuation of the campaign. Since there were no campaigns for elves, mages, demons, and necromancers in Hammers of Fate.
At the beginning of the book, I included the history of all the races that are on this site and images of all the main characters of the campaigns I wrote about. The book doesn't have spectacular battles, as there were many of them. And I don't think it would be interesting to read anyway.:rolleyes:

But the main thing is not the battles, but an interesting plot... And I will have a problem with the language... Although I'm from there, I've completely forgotten the language:smile32:
Step aside from the way of a better man than you
So you fall at his feet hes the one who betrays you
Its the servants devotion for the decay
Stand up

There are no flowers on your grave
There are no chains
There I keep chanting for the forgotten name © Amorphis
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{EK, if you need help, just ask.
3DogMZA, who are you writing for? For yourself? Or so that people can read it and admire it? :)
My friends, inspired by {EK, I decided to create a work of art, but in poetic form. The beginning is here! I need criticism, ideas on how to develop the plot, etc.
Thank you in advance!

P.S.: No matter how good the picture may be, imagination is better.
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I liked your poem; your verses are much better than my boring prose.
Step aside from the way of a better man than you
So you fall at his feet hes the one who betrays you
Its the servants devotion for the decay
Stand up

There are no flowers on your grave
There are no chains
There I keep chanting for the forgotten name © Amorphis
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Thank you! Can you send me your writing? In my deep conviction, reading is almost always more interesting than playing.
Said and thought - almost sacrilege! :)

You are right about reading and games:smile54: I will send it to you, but first I will retype it, and then you will throw boots at me)))
Step aside from the way of a better man than you
So you fall at his feet hes the one who betrays you
Its the servants devotion for the decay
Stand up

There are no flowers on your grave
There are no chains
There I keep chanting for the forgotten name © Amorphis
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eXeCuToR;116035
You're right about reading and games:smile54: I'll share it, but first I'll retype it, and then you'll start throwing shoes at me)))

Why so harsh?:o I really appreciate creativity in any form, simply because it is creativity :)
And if we're talking about Heroes, that's a whole different story!
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So, at Drakon's request, I'm posting my short story about Heroes 5. There's a second one, but it's even shorter. Maybe I'll post it later if needed. P.S. Those who don't want to be too disappointed in me – don't read it.
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Step aside from the way of a better man than you
So you fall at his feet hes the one who betrays you
Its the servants devotion for the decay
Stand up

There are no flowers on your grave
There are no chains
There I keep chanting for the forgotten name © Amorphis
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eXeCuToR, great story, it's captivating. Don't be offended if I point out some flaws? We'll skip the grammar, as it's a problem for almost everyone. But the style... There's no denying it's good, but "I," "my," "we," and "us" are repeated too often – a couple of times in one sentence – that's too much. Another point is the repetition not only of pronouns but also of other parts of the sentence. For example, the first thing that stood out was: "However, I couldn't let it show – it would demoralize the troops on my flank, frozen in perfect formation. Although the hordes of demons rushing towards us could demoralize even Elrath himself." In the second case, the word "demoralize" could be replaced with a synonym, such as "frighten," "make tremble with fear," etc. Perhaps that's all... everything that immediately catches the eye. As all writers say, you need to work on the text and style. But overall, I liked it. Especially the description of the battle. The problem with most authors is that the description of the battle is boring, and it's impossible to visualize it in your head. Reading your text, I saw the whole battle in detail. Thank you for the enjoyable time :)
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