gamehuntera
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I agree, the names should be changed. And... the faction is too similar to real-life Egypt. It needs something unique added to it. Undead are dead. Elementals are spirits. But here, it's just a generic Egyptian castle.
For example, they could be made into servants of Gods who came to destroy the world or lift cities into the air. It needs a unique trait, something fantastical. And, of course, something interesting.
For example, they could be made into servants of Gods who came to destroy the world or lift cities into the air. It needs a unique trait, something fantastical. And, of course, something interesting.