Ideas and suggestions.

This needs to be screenshotted urgently! Who knows, maybe the author will suddenly gain literacy or intelligence/maturity. And this timeless piece will be lost...

Write, Kozma, write. Write while the fire still burns in your heart and loins, while your mind is not clouded by stupid spelling)

P.S. "iz-podtezka," "potikhinku" - This is a masterpiece! I won't even mention the style...