The Restoration Team

Very little text; I didn't like the phrase "Lisander has no one to celebrate the victory over Vorton with." Better to add a richer plot twist, raise Lisander's level (correspondingly, significantly strengthen the enemies that will be), mention that Lisander starts in Paledon - the capital of Palaedra. The portal, portal leading to the lands of Order should be replaced with the fact that Lisander travels to the Great Arcanum (the kingdom where Solmir lives). It would be better to make Lisander's biography and name like in the hero map that I sent you.