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#90
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There is very little text, and the phrase "Lysander has no one to celebrate his victory over Vorton with" didn't appeal to me. It would be better to add a more elaborate plot twist, increase Lysander's level (and, accordingly, significantly strengthen the enemies he will face), and mention that Lysander starts in Paladon – the capital of Paladra. The portal leading to the lands of Haven should be replaced with Lysander traveling to the Great Arcanum (the kingdom where Solmyr lives). It would be better to create a biography and name for Lysander, as in the hero map that I sent you.