I will correct my mistakes

I watched the game in bits and pieces, so I don't claim a full picture, but here's what caught my eye:

1) Poor move management, unnecessary losses of moves in simple situations. For example, to visit an object above the road, you go under it, then up, when you should go diagonally. And many similar episodes.

2) Mistakes with the order of hero turns. Scouts should move first, then the other heroes—it allows you to choose a plan with full information.

For example, after capturing the Castle village, you immediately hired Crag Hack there without first scouting the second road. And there turned out to be a Tavern village; it would have been more logical to hire Crag Hack there, saving a day of tempo.

Similarly with Vidomina—you moved her a couple of tiles out of the Tavern village and then started moving other heroes. You should have first moved Vidomina as far as possible onto the snow, and only then decide who to send where.

3) Chaos when multiple heroes interact in a small area of the map. If a series of troop transfers back and forth is planned, you need to think through the entire combination first, and only then start executing it.

For example, the fuss around the external dwelling of Faeries and the Huts cost Crag Hack and his sidekick 500-600 moves total between them.

4) The enemy's Castle almost always spawns in the center of the zone. So there was no need to run down through the snow at all; you should either break through the Hobbitts and kill the enemy, or get out of there, sending a scout down the road.

5) Crag Hack ran through 3 villages but didn't buy a spell book anywhere. That's a fail—Dad needs to buy a spell book at the first opportunity; later there may be no time for it. In the end, he went into the Griffin Conservatory without a book.

6) On day 121, the Griffin Conservatory was taken even with what was available. I won't suggest battle tactics—try to find them yourself.

7) Judging by the chaotic placement of towns on day 121, you planned to use Dad to bypass 2 Dragon Fly Hives and another Griffin Conservatory after the first one, and then break through to the Town? Is that right? That's all very slow—it would have taken 3-4 days. Half of that could have been taken with towns.