Lokken, if MSCH agrees with the bio, which I have modified, will you revise it to make it more readable?

What do you think?

From childhood, Dreylan was attracted to various magical items. One day, while spending time in the library, she came across a description of an incredibly beautiful relic - a pitcher of inexhaustible mana. This unusual artifact appeared in her dreams every night, so the elf set out to find it. Reaching the eastern border of Ranaar, the girl met a dream interpreter who told her that the artifact was kept under the ancestral tree of her family. When Dreylan found the mysterious pitcher, it suddenly shone with a soft light in her hands, and then shattered into many fragments. The gift received from the relic, which allowed her to restore mana in peacetime, greatly helped the elf in her fight against the undead that had invaded Irollan.