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Regarding the music. Another opinion.
The music itself isn't bad. However, I have some remarks.
1) In neither version is a General motif traceable from beginning to end. The motif changes throughout the entire track.
2) Both tracks start very abruptly. Without any kind of buildup, so to speak.
3) In the first track (IMHO), the sound of the surf is unnecessary. This town (IMHO) should be associated not with water, but with an advanced civilization.
I also have some advice:
1) You could borrow music from the classics. As was done in Heroes III. Just adapt it a bit and use it.
2) Work more with people not involved in the project. I mean on forums, websites, on the net, in short.
P.S.: I'll browse around and look into all this, and then I'll help you with my crazy ideas. (if you don't mind, of course)
The music itself isn't bad. However, I have some remarks.
1) In neither version is a General motif traceable from beginning to end. The motif changes throughout the entire track.
2) Both tracks start very abruptly. Without any kind of buildup, so to speak.
3) In the first track (IMHO), the sound of the surf is unnecessary. This town (IMHO) should be associated not with water, but with an advanced civilization.
I also have some advice:
1) You could borrow music from the classics. As was done in Heroes III. Just adapt it a bit and use it.
2) Work more with people not involved in the project. I mean on forums, websites, on the net, in short.
P.S.: I'll browse around and look into all this, and then I'll help you with my crazy ideas. (if you don't mind, of course)
