Other World

I'll reiterate what I said before. The main thing is what exactly didn't you like.
Write down everything that needs to be fixed in your opinion; it will be considered and, if necessary, corrected.

The biggest drawback of the map is that you get so engrossed in playing it that you risk losing your weekend. :D
But seriously, I've played all the maps by this author that are available on this resource, and all the maps are excellent! There's a balance of power, zoning, quests with adequate rewards, etc.
Regarding this map: I didn't understand why the passage to the red faction is closed (or maybe I just didn't find the passage); I had to kill 2,000 dragons to get the Book of Air, which cost me 2 months (sleeping, gathering population), and in the end, I completed it in 11 months.