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I tried playing the map. Saves don't load, which is unusual for a map of this size. The inability to save is a critical issue for me – I can't play without being able to take breaks. But even with a quick look, besides the saving issue, it's worth noting that the map is overloaded with effects. They are at least distracting and make it difficult to see the surroundings. Even if this was the intention, it needs to be reworked so it doesn't strain the eyes. The lighting situation also affects the stylistic aspects; the excessive use of exclamation marks is completely unnecessary. Regarding other elements, I tried playing as Humans. Alaric's starting upgrade isn't very good. Having "Retribution" at the start isn't very profitable (the army is small); "Magic of Speed" would be much better. It's all fine, but there's no quick way to get rid of this "junk." I would prefer a hero with just "Skilled Attack," and let players choose perks to their liking. The starting army was surprising. The presence of a Seraph is at least very generous (even on "Hero" difficulty, or in "HARDCORE mode," it doesn't feel challenging), and the choice of specific upgrades is a matter of taste... but it seems to be in the "Monsieur knows what he likes" category. I had a similar feeling when I opened Alaric's spellbook: it includes "Freezing Touch" (?).
Overall impression: the map is a rough draft, plagued by many "childhood" problems. It needs a lot of work.