The League of Laws is an inter-clan council.

Interesting additions. But one thing is unclear: why have a chamber of commons and a chamber of lords, and why should they have an equal number of members? Two chambers make sense when one is used for broader discussions and the other for final decision-making. Therefore, I would suggest either one chamber plus a secretariat, or two chambers, but with three representatives from each clan: two in the chamber of commons and one in the chamber of lords. As for the other additions, there are no complaints. Let's quickly draft the charter and put it to a vote among the clan leaders.