You have a "Seductress" upgrade - crossbowman. Fix it.
"3.1. Satyr" - it's hard to associate with the traditional hairy guy with a flute, but it's fantasy, so anything is possible.
5.2. Sultan of Ifrits
Leaders of the Ifrits, clad in obsidian armor. Their fire, which they shoot, hits a specific area. Ranged attack." - these guys are taken from the Quran, but within the Askhan universe, how do they differ from ordinary fire elementals?
I have problems with the Dungeon faction and a question about the Elves: Should I give the cavalry pegasi or unicorns instead of horses (in both cases, there will be no unicorns without riders separately)?