Dyrman, I would still rewrite it, make it more concise and to the point. Although, adding to it is also an idea.

For complete satisfaction, Duncan and Ilia should be added to the mod.

Vincent.
Vincent, along with his brother Dominic, participated in Godric's diplomatic mission to the Silver Cities, as a result of which the Wizards supported the Grey Alliance and, together with the Imperials and Elves, repelled the demon invasion. Vincent still remembers with horror the expedition to the dragon utopia, where the artifact needed by Godric, the Amulet of Mastery, was kept. Despite the fact that the Duke of Unicorn forbade the plundering of the utopia under pain of death, fearing the wrath of the gods, Vincent disobeyed the order and secretly took out a small, dusty book. The dragons, sensing the betrayal, mercilessly attacked Godric's army. By a miracle, the Imperials managed to escape from the dark caves. Godric never managed to find the culprit; and Vincent did not confess to what he had done. At night, he began to read the stolen book, but more than ten years have passed, and he still hasn't been able to get to the end of it.