So, the Mage who predicted the birth of Jesus and guided him was a Satanist? :eek:

I agree, I made a mistake. By the way, try searching for "Balthazar" in Google Images.

I wonder, will Shadia have such an old biography, or can we give her a new one, but with adjustments to the plot?
Will Ion and Drago be reworked/replaced? (in terms of names)

I've reviewed the existing biographies and found several errors:

Unutel

It would be good to add the word "survive" - the only way to survive is...
klochok - should be spelled with "o".

Ilmirn
Chudishch - without the sign.

Olhar - in one place, you need to add "he".
....of cities, HE learned to be very skillful....

Ksuda - suluzhila.

Mirabelle - it's better to remove the phrase "premature baby".
Went to the sea - either go TO the shore or INTO the sea.

Vincent - you can add "SIMULTANEOUSLY" - looks both similar and different.

Avrana - was trying. Is that her?

Shargat - grew up to be an excellent warrior - better: grew up to be an excellent soldier.

Khuvrat - "Not a warrior" - probably.

Elmandr - from the territory - THEIR territory.
Fagus - above the roof - roofs.

Ksana - there is a COUNTERFORCE to strength - better: an obstacle.
suffered (the word "defeat" is missing)

Abissid:
The illegitimate son of a murdered mage and a brutally beaten pregnant woman was able to be born :( :( :confused:
It needs to be worded differently.