The only problem is that each player can go to, let's say, another player's "town." Therefore, I suggest removing the transitions between 3-4 and 8-9. What do you think? And maybe then something will change with the roads...
not quite... the passage between 3 and 4 is good, but 8 and 9 definitely shouldn't be connected, most likely 8 and 10 would be better. I haven't checked yet, but maybe if we remove these roads and put 1 Fortress in each town, then maybe we won't have to run through the wilderness, although in that case, it will turn out to be a version 2 of the map :)