Out-of-game communication.

Although I'm not a GM, but an assistant GM, I think I can answer your question ;) I have no complaints about the art, IMHO. But I simply don't see any special abilities in your application at all!

What about forging runic artifacts (for now, they are weak, but we'll see) and elven hearing? It's described in the biography; maybe it needs to be highlighted separately?

P.S. Viz, maybe it's time to give a quest? I'll go do something; we're having a nice conversation, but I also need to level up.