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[TESTING] Naithaven Sorceress (s)

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St.Snake
Just like your two previous maps, this one is also terrible. There's no plot, or rather, it's at the level of a preschooler.
A huge number of spelling mistakes. Moreover, the mistakes themselves are less annoying than the numerous typos, which indicate your inattentiveness and also a lack of respect for potential players, considering that you treat even something you enjoy so carelessly. And I also don't understand why you use two commas as quotation marks in dialogues? There's a special key for quotation marks on any keyboard.
Why do all your heroes have names from the original campaigns, but have different skills, portraits, and backstories? Is it really that hard to come up with your own names?
The scripts are also extremely primitive; you could have learned some decent techniques from other, more serious maps a long time ago.
I feel like I wanted to add something else, but for now, I think this is enough. This is definitely not a serious project.

I've been wanting to comment on Alexander and Conan for a while, but I didn't do it because I thought you weren't visiting the forum anymore. I'll comment on them later.
At least the landscape is better here.
And in general, I don't think Maahir should be criticized so harshly; he's a novice in mapmaking (as I see it), and novices should be encouraged