It's rather strange that Hos didn't notice this.
And now I'll tell a shorter version.
Only if the first description is still somewhat similar to the caption (and even then I'm inclined to think it's a dramatic description of a fight, and the standout/extraneous detail is the shot to the leg), then regarding the second murder it's complete nonsense, both with "got a taste for it = eat me up", and with "the other world = the Abyss". Allegory is certainly possible, but not to this insane degree.
As for recruitment, I won't deny it, that's a possibility. But Nae is not alone in the mafia, and her wishes might not have aligned with the team's thoughts. Take Kyle, for example — if he were a mafioso, he would have recruited Slonysh, especially before the meeting. Or he would have just recruited randomly, instead of trying to add "such a player" to his team for a plus.
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and there Void is specifically another world.
