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I read the first part of the work, and surprisingly, although it has some errors, it has a certain logic. There is none of that here. There isn't even much to laugh about in the first part, except perhaps this:
everything was as usual: the soldiers of fiery rock always killed everyone in sight.
But overall, it's passable. The second part won't work, and if you read my and Vervolkin's posts, you'll understand that we've written almost all the criticism for you. And yes, the mask in the first part is mentioned, but there's not a word about the "devil's stone." And in general, apart from the main character, there is no connection between the two parts, even in terms of the plot.

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