Bets.

on the past of the Other before the Other

My head is not this power double two.

Well, here we go. First question, which in no way relates to what's already been written: what world is this in?

"The elves stood before the demons as the sole enemy" (imagine that, humans have angels and paladins). They agreed to an experiment because "many wanted to become much stronger," "after which they were settled on the Other so they could improve and grow stronger" and SUDDENLY! "they spiraled out of control." And I had no idea that if you strengthen the main and only enemy and let them "improve and grow stronger," they wouldn't obey me. Ungrateful. "Many of them became total saints," but if the elves weren't saints, why are they enemies of the demons? Maybe they were competitors instead? ;)
"They were sewing then in the TL (Dark Forest)" sewing-sewing, and didn't finish. Why? "suddenly a coup occurred among the elves," passions are heating up, "elven subtype Forest Elves" Form:humanoid; Type:elf; Subtype:Forest elf; Size:90-60-90; Result:"I need your clothes." Sorry, couldn't help myself :). "Forest elves were forced to flee, and soon, to obtain a home, took a home from the Irns"—a great way to get a home always justifies itself, why negotiate with kin (since Irns were elves), it's easier to kick them out.
"They had to settle in underground caves, after which their race became stronger thanks to wild animals." Zoophiles detected.

I figured out that Bugargo is trying to eat the enemy (or maybe I failed to imagine it with a weapon? :smile32: )

"resembles large dragons in that it breathes something," OOO-HO!!! I breathe, I resemble a large dragon!!! "And in its blood there is poison, not acid!" yes, I know it's poison. Only before the explanation, I assumed this thing bites, and since it's a not-so-small lizard, do you know what kind of jagged wounds come from such bites? Then it's hacked and splashes of poisonous blood easily enter the enemy's wound.

"but they are a heavy trial for merchants and rich people without guards because if they get tired they kill quickly, but if a rich man or merchant is alone they will first cruelly torture the enemy" What will they get tired of? From the cruel torture of the enemy (by the way, where is the enemy? or is a penniless merchant without guards considered an enemy nowadays?)? I'll let you in on a secret: sadists don't get tired of torture. "physique meaning they were born weak and stayed that way," then where does the strength come from? Or are you talking about "Use the Force, Luke"?
"Prisoner really means jailer." There are plenty of jailers, where are so many prisoners coming from for these saints? "Gained wisdom in prison"—he cut out the brains of the prisoners and put them in a backpack, gained a lot of wisdom. "Gained wisdom in prison and realized it's better to wear strong armor, but a very ordinary sword, not an enchanted one"—he was an idiot, and an idiot he remained. He doesn't think to wear armor and a magic sword, it's either a magic sword, or armor and a plain sword. With a bag of brains on his back.

"You didn't understand about Squarn,"

who is Скварн?

You're a perceptive lad, I see. "Squarn is a demon mentor who taught the first Irns dark magic, killed during the invasion of the FE." And I thought the Irns threw off the yoke of the demons... Well, a race of saints worshipping a demon... "This is where reality and the game intersect"—I'm waiting for Pushkin to appear in the plot, at the very least. "A fanatic climbing the career ladder becomes a lord and commands the others. I wrote incorrectly about the staff and the knife: staff is long-range attack, knife is short-range. The damage bar is like this: imagine the game field and one bar, and damage is dealt across this entire bar." Um. Where is the intersection with reality? Though, I have one guess. Don't be offended, I might destroy a childhood illusion now, but you're a big boy and should already know the Truth. So know, young blind one, parents lie—Father Frost doesn't exist!

Old version: "After death, the cult lord is reborn as a shadow traveling through the world created by Squarn. But the strongest among them break back into the Other." New: "to create a shadow you must kill the cult lord (but this is only done in a difficult situation"—Crusaders hit him over the head with a sword, what's so difficult about that? "which gives Squarn" (killed during the FE invasion) "the right to return the cult lord to life in the form of a shadow." Before they returned on their own, now Squarn returns them—yes, my friend, a new edition of the rules, I see!

"rotten dwarf both runs and walks" A miracle! A miracle! The cripple is healed! "Brother of Darkness simply evaporates the darkness," let him evaporate it. I, in my poverty of thought, actually thought that evaporating is only for liquid substances, but if there's nothing better to do, let him try to evaporate the darkness. The main thing is not to turn on the light, it would ruin the man's fun.

"With the assassin, it's truly holy naivety," I can't stop laughing at this. "An assassin kills quickly, paying attention to nothing," do they even look at who they are killing? Or is that also something they pay no attention to? "And becoming a brother of mercy, he remembers everything bad..." And before that, he suffered from sclerosis. Poor thing. And the brothers of mercy, out of spite, don't stop new assassins, let them act badly (killing quickly, paying attention to nothing is bad; now they pay attention and don't kill friends, brothers, sisters...), but then they'll also be atoning for their sins.

But seriously. First think for yourself about what you're writing, then write. Some things you explained, some—you confused even further.