[HL] "Natalia - Vampire Lord"

I looked at your map. A lot of effort was put into it, and just filling the events was a challenge, but I agree with the author above. The map design lacks details; there are no pleasant-looking little details like grass or stones. Many locations are completely empty, and the monsters are placed strangely. You shouldn't have chosen a large map size; learn to create on smaller maps, but make sure it's visually appealing and that there are adventures everywhere, rather than huge wastelands. In any case, it's a good start.