Map improvement.
For now, recommendations have been received from one pHOMM and, combined, they look like this (excluding bug fixes):

1. Remove the event near the dragonfly.
2. Add explanatory text before Aeris and the slave trader's hut.
3. Remove Pathfinding for the main hero.

4.

some events are impossible to find unless you look in the editor

Along with some other points, this leads to questions specifically for the players:
-Where else in the map should we add story and explanatory text?

Explanatory text helps with the walkthrough (including finding events), and story text explains the map's plot.

-What questions does the current story text fail to answer regarding the plot?

If I missed any recommendations from pHOMM or if anyone else has advice regarding the map, please post them in this thread.