I can't yet express a clear opinion about the setting... I need to read it carefully. Right now, it's all a jumble in my head because of these hat-wearing characters and the overall psychedelic vibe. The only thing I want to suggest is:
It would be best to remove the "Chetzar" copyright... it doesn't look good on the artwork, especially when one of the factions is also named after the Chetzar.
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