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"Heroes' Herald"

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Sorry for being so blunt.
This isn't being blunt; it's just stating the obvious.
And the comment I'm making now about the numerous spelling, factual, and punctuation errors (yes, there are many) isn't being blunt either; it's a perfectly objective assessment.
You can get used to the design over time, but this font is not the best choice, especially against a bright orange background. It's hard on the eyes, and they get very tired.
And finally, the content, where only about ten out of thirty pages are actually about the "heroes," and the rest are filled with copied articles or photos taken last week of people hanging out on a bench with beer, or attempts to create a separate section about hardware and software, leaves much to be desired.
And even the "heroic" content itself is nothing more than a compilation of facts that almost any player already knows.
And sometimes, the attempts to explain some slang word or replace it with a more common one, while continuing to use the same slang in all other sentences, are quite amusing.

I hope this brief critique is constructive enough for you. Just don't say that this creation doesn't need improvement.