[HL] "Natalia - Vampire Lord"

What can I say – playing through the map didn't appeal to me when I opened it in the editor. Honestly, I didn’t like that you left an empty map. I understand this is your first map, but you shouldn’t have started with the largest sizes; a minimal version would be the optimal starting point for a cartographer. The most important thing for you to learn is how to beautifully recreate the landscape and the overall picture of the map. Here, you simply have vast emptinesses, which immediately diminished my desire to play (at least, mine). As for the scripts, yes, some not-so-simple scripts were used, and for a first map, that's actually a plus. But otherwise… you need to work on creating a beautiful landscape. Here are some of my maps – just take a look at how the landscapes are made there.