What does "defendant" mean? Defendants appear in court. And no one is threatening Zane – she lives in Saref's head. And what is there to defend her from? Who from? And you guys have strayed from the topic. Here, as I understand it, they are discussing the picture, not expressing sympathy for Zane.
the rest isn't very good, especially the tail. It should be graceful and adorn her, not disfigure her.
