Are there still writers on the Heroes of Might and Magic forums?

Mutare Drake, your story is good, but there's enough plot for a full-length book, and you tried to cram it all into a short story, resulting in the characters rushing around Europe, which becomes periodically amusing. Also, please use proper punctuation, as the text is sometimes difficult to read.
WhiteLizard, and with you (or your friend), everything is terribly chaotic and often it's not clear at all how it all connects. :confused: