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Although the plot was written by a 15-year-old, it's still terrible. I'm almost 15 (just a month away), but I write much better! And this kid, apparently, just doesn't know what real fantasy is!
But, I'm getting at the fact that this guy could have come up with something more interesting and less cliché. Although the idea isn't bad, it just needed to be presented better, for example, by having the main character or the dragon die, or someone else from the good and main characters, or by making it so that the main villain survives, so that this kid has to fight him for a long time, while also showing the essence of the book. Apparently, this kid, although he has a good imagination, finds it difficult to convey the whole essence, or maybe he just hasn't had any fresh, interesting ideas yet, and he just rushed, so it's not clear...
