IMHO, there will be too many undead in the Asylum. The race has a right to exist, but again, with significant caveats and improvements. And again, to the author: If you have enough imagination to create so many races, why not consolidate them into a single "Factory"? And another question: why are you creating these races? If it's for yourself, just merge everything into the "Factory"; you'll get praise and criticism there, it will take up less space, and everyone will be happy. If you want to bring it to a "not bad, maybe it could be a mod someday" level, then first bring one race to that state, and then move on to the next. These are just my friendly suggestions. P.S. Whirlwind, your "Unusual!!!!" killed me :D